Different sunday.
Today I waked up at 6 o clock and I was cooking after I taken my medications as usual.
I went to hospital for a serum iron but I was a great experience because my friend administers this medication .
When I out I looked the clock and it was 11h30 .I walk twenty block until my sweet house I taken my backpack and taken my book and I was walking some block until my mom's house .I ate lunch and I went to my classmate's house for make homework of the next week .
He have a children of only seven years, his children is a intelligent boy while we were making our homework he were playing .Later two hours we end! and my friend let me in the San Blas park ( it's a beautiful place near to my mom' home) and there I meet with David , my friend because we had other homework for tomorrow and finally my others classmates cannot went to meet for they had work.
I get back to my home and now I'm listening electronic music.
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A different Sunday Today I woke up at 6 o'clock and I was cooking after I took my medications as usual. I went to the hospital for a iron serum, but it was a great experience because my friend administers this medication. When I got out, I looked at the clock and it was 11:30. I walked twenty blocks until I got to my sweet home. I took my backpack and taken my book, then walked a few blocks to my mom's house. I ate lunch and then went to my classmate's house to do next week's homework. He has a child that is only seven years old. His child is a intelligent boy. While we were doing our homework, he was playing. Two hours later we finished, and my friend let me in the San Blas park. ( it's a beautiful place near to my mom' home) and There is where I met my other friend David, because we had other homework to do for tomorrow. And finally for my others classmates, I could not go to meet them because they had to work.
I got back to my house and now I'm listening to electronic (techno) music.1
Today I *woke* up at 6 o clock and I was cooking after I *took* my medications as *per* usual.
I went to *a* hospital for an iron *serum* but *it* was a great experience because my friend administers this medication .
When I *was* out I looked *at* the clock and it was 11h30 .I *walked* twenty blocks until my sweet house *where* I *had* taken my backpack and *had* taken my book and I was walking *a few* blocks until my mom's house .I ate lunch and I went to my classmate's house *to do the week's homework.*
He *has* children of only seven years, his *child* is *an* intelligent boy while we were *doing* our homework he *was* playing. Two hours *later* we *finished*! and my friend let me in the San Blas park ( it's a beautiful place near to my mom's home) and there I *met* with David , my friend because we had other homework for tomorrow and finally my other classmates *were not able to meet because they had homework*
I *got* back to my home and now I'm listening *to* electronic music.
Good job, good story. Lots of homework, next time talk about fun and play
I went to *a* hospital for an iron *serum* but *it* was a great experience because my friend administers this medication .
When I *was* out I looked *at* the clock and it was 11h30 .I *walked* twenty blocks until my sweet house *where* I *had* taken my backpack and *had* taken my book and I was walking *a few* blocks until my mom's house .I ate lunch and I went to my classmate's house *to do the week's homework.*
He *has* children of only seven years, his *child* is *an* intelligent boy while we were *doing* our homework he *was* playing. Two hours *later* we *finished*! and my friend let me in the San Blas park ( it's a beautiful place near to my mom's home) and there I *met* with David , my friend because we had other homework for tomorrow and finally my other classmates *were not able to meet because they had homework*
I *got* back to my home and now I'm listening *to* electronic music.
Good job, good story. Lots of homework, next time talk about fun and play
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