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I live in Valley View. It locates north east of Adelaide . It lies between Grand junction and Wright road. There are three councils in this suburb,but my house belongs to Port Adelaide council .Our suburb has a lot of parks,children are often found playing in the parks. Dry Creek runs through our suburb.A gym,foodland and seveal restaurants are within walking distance.The traffic is very convenient .It only takes me 25 minutes to reach city by O-bahn bus. People of my neighborhood are very friendly. It's a pleasant place to live.

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My Suburb

I live in Valley View. It's locates located in the [/It's in the] north east of Adelaide. It lies between Grand Junction Road and Wright Road. There are three councils in this suburb, but  and my house belongs to Port Adelaide council. Our suburb has a lot of parks, and children are often found playing in the parks. Dry Creek runs through our suburb. A gym, Foodland and several restaurants are within walking distance. The traffic transport is very convenient. It only takes me 25 minutes to reach the city by O-Bahn bus. The people of my neighborhood are very friendly. It's a pleasant place to live.

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