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Will you correct this text, please? The play I game Lately I very seldom play in computer games. Now, from time to time, I play in the "Deponia Doomsday". It's a quest game. I liked the Deponia's world very much since the first part of the game. I like the games of Deponia series because of their puzzles are logic, their plot is nontrivial and their humor is cheerful, but it's black sometimes though. My elder son asked me once: "Do you wanna be like Rufus?". Rufus is the protagonist of the game. "No way!" ‒ I answered. "Why? He's so resourceful!" ‒ he surprised. "Yes, he is. But he has no roof!". "Yes, he hasn't. ‒ my son was continuing to require. ‒ But he was able to achieve the love of the amazing Elyzian girl!". It was a strong argument, and I didn't find how this could be objected to.

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Lately I have very seldom been playing _computer games. Now, from time to time, I play _ the "Deponia Doomsday". It's a quest game. I liked the Deponia's world very much from the first part of the game. I like the games of the Deponia series because _ their puzzles are logical, their plot is nontrivial and their humor is cheerful, but it's black sometimes though. My elder son asked me once: "Do you want to be like Rufus?". Rufus is the main character  of the game. "No way!" ‒ I answered. "Why? He's so resourceful!" ‒ he said, surprised. "Yes, he is. But he has no roof!". "No, he hasn’t . ‒ my son was continuing to insist. ‒ But he was able to achieve the love of the amazing Elyzian girl!". It was a strong argument, and I couldn’t  find a way to how this could be objected to.

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