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My View on Allergy Allergies, also known as allergic diseases, are a number of conditions caused by hypersensitivity of the immune system to something in the environment that usually causes little or no problem in most people. There are some reasons to explain why allergies are common in developed world. Initially, people living there prefer to drink milk and eat cheesecakes, bread and other food high in protein. Moreover, there are several different environments, climates, genes and lifestyles between developed world and developing world. Eventually, people there take allergies more seriously. Whereas a large part of people living in developing world don't know whether they are allergy. In order to prevent from allergies, early exposed to potential allergens might be protective. The reliable treatments for allergies include avoiding known allergens such as peanuts, milk and mangoes and the use of medication such as steroids and antihistamines.

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Well done Beauty, I study medicine and I have heard a lot of experts having a similar view on the topic. They say that natural exposure to allergens and microbes might be protective against the development of allergic diseases, as well as other medical conditions. Also it is important to note that developing countries do not have the resources to diagnose allergic diseases as compared to developed countries, in addition to having other more important diseases, such as infectious diseases, which occupies all of their interest and effort.

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My View on Allergy

Allergies, also known as allergic diseases, are a number of conditions caused by hypersensitivity of the immune system towards something in the environment that usually causes little or no problems in most people.

There are some reasons explaining why allergies are common in the developed world. Initially, people living there prefer to drink milk and eat cheesecakes, bread and other food high in protein. Moreover, there are several different environments, climates, genes and lifestyles differences between the developed world and the developing world. Consequently/ as a result/ hence, people there take allergies more seriously. Whereas a large part of people living in the developing world don't know whether they are allergic.

In order to prevent from allergies, early exposure to potential allergens might be protective. The reliable treatments for allergies include avoiding known allergens such as peanuts, milk and mangoes, and the use of medications such as steroids and antihistamines.
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Allergies is a sensetive to me, because one year ago I got problem of my nose, and I was diagnosed as allergic rhinitis. I tried some medicines, but it didn't work well, and doctors told me it is about immuse system, then, I started to walk regularly and thus keep my lungs strong, it helps.

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