My friends, help me to correct this text, please.
The development of ideas about the processes of mixing of river and sea waters in estuaries
The basic stages of development of understanding of the processes occurring on the border of the river and the sea are inspected. With the development of the theoretical Oceanography and improvement of the measuring instruments the process of mixing river and sea water had been considered from different positions and with different degree of confidence.
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My friends, help me to correct this text, please.
The development of ideas about surrounding* the processes of mixing river and sea waters** in estuariesThe basic stages of development of in understanding of the processes occurring on the border of the river and the sea are inspected. With the development of the theoretical Oceanography and improvement of the measuring instruments the process of mixing river and sea water had has been considered from different positions and with different varying*** degrees of confidence.
*No mistake here. I just think this word choice sounds better. It fits the formal tone.
**"Waters" pluralized can be used in formal contexts like this. Good work!
*** Again, no mistake just suggesting a nicer sounding word. :)
Overall excellent work. Keep it up!
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