Could someone help me with the grammar. Thanks
I am writing to you with reference to your advertisement in the Benningon Rock Festival. I am interested in having good time at the Rock Festival and I would like further information about it.
Firstly, I would appreciate if you could tell me the timetables of transport you provide. It would be useful for us to know exactly the times because we have to come back Lanzarote on the last flight on Sunday 9.15pm.
Moreover, we can not come on Friday, so I would like to know whether we take part in the festival only two days and if the same price. Finally, I wonder if all of us stay in the same room, and I would be grateful if you let me know whether room for three people is available.
I am looking forward to receiving your reply.
Your faithfully,
Eddie
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Could someone help me with the grammar. Thanks
I am writing to you with reference to your advertisement in the Benningon Rock Festival. I am interested in having a good time at the Rock Festival and I would like further information about it.Firstly, I would appreciate if you could give me the timetable of transport you provide. This would be useful for us to know because our last return fight to Lanzarote is on Sunday 9.15pm.
Moreover, we cannot come on Friday, so I would like to know whether our two day festival is the same price? Finally, I wonder if all of us can in the same room, and I would be grateful if you let me know whether a three person's room is available?
I am looking forward to receiving your reply. Thank you.
Your faithfully,
Eddie
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