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Text unit 9 Good evening. I'd like to say a few words to the people who are here today, Fist all, I'd like to tank everyone and mainly for supporting me in the realization of this dream. I'd also like to say tnak you to my parents who have always taught me to never give up on project. This party has been a great way to express my thanks to everyone. I hope that tonight we can celebrate all our achievements of the las 5 years. On final thing before I finish. The project has been a opportunity to talk about the advances of neuropsychology and develop new ideias.

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Text unit 9

Good evening. I'd like to say a few words to the people who are here today,
First of all (Or First off), Fist all, I'd like to thank everyone and mainly for supporting me in the realization of this dream.
I'd also like to say thank  you to my parents who have always taught me to never give up on project.
This party has been a great way to express my thanks to everyone. I hope that tonight we can celebrate all our achievements of the last 5 years.
One final thing before I finish. The project has been a an opportunity to talk about the advances of neuro-psychology and develop new ideias. ideas.
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Text unit 9

Good evening. I'd like to say a few words to the people who are here today.
First all, I'd like to thank everyone, mainly for supporting me in the realization of this/my* dream.
I'd also like to say thank you to my parents who have always taught me to never give up on project.
This party has been a great way to express my thanks to everyone. I hope that tonight we can celebrate all our achievements over the last 5 years.
One final thing before I finish. The project has been a opportunity to talk about the advances of neuropsychology and develop new ideas.

*You could also use 'my dream', if you are talking about your own dream. Either way is correct but for me, 'my dream' would sound more natural.


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