Some sentences.
1) Upon the completion of the class News Commentary, I combined my in-class as well as after-class study and wrote an essay.
2) The team's efficiency and precision in investigating and data analyzing showed me a promising generation of future scholars.
3) His active participation in class discussion and persistence to question impressed me.
Are there any problems of these sentences?
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Some sentences.
1) Upon the completion of the class News Commentary, I combined my in-class as well as after-class study and wrote an essay.2) The team's efficiency and precision in investigating (investigation) and data analyzing (analysis) showed me a promising generation of future scholars.
3) His active participation in the class discussion his and persistence to answer (or ask) questions impressed me.
Are there any problems of these sentences?
Hi Zhang your sentences are all structurally sound.
For sentence number two I just gave an alternative way to express it.
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