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please correct my writting. I've started my job on this April. I've liked English when I was a child. But I hadn't get the chance to get the job of English. It's really hard to me ,so far. Because, I feel ashamed, but my English isn't perfect . I have to study it myself everyday. and also I need knowlage for kids. There are a bunch of types of kids. I can't contral them sometimes. They are really freedom, yes, ofcause they are!

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Please correct my writing.

I started my job in April.
I liked English when I was a child. But I didn't get a chance to get a job with English.  It's really hard for me, so far because, I feel ashamed, because my English isn't perfect .
I have to study it by myself everyday and also I need this knowledge for the kids. There are a bunch of types of kids and I can't control them sometimes.
They are really free, yes, of course they are!

Hello Smayu,

This is a good text but there are some corrections needed. We use the present perfect when something happened in the unknown past and there is a result in the present. As soon as we know when the action took place we normally use the past simple. So "April" is finished and when you were a child is also finished.

As Rayah said some parts are not clear. I believe from context that you may be a teacher. Is this correct? If this is the case, then it all becomes clear.

Hope this helps


Bob



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Please correct my writing.

I've started my job on this April.  I started my job last April. OR I will start my job this April.
I've liked English when I was a child. But I hadn't get the chance to get the job of English. I've liked English since I was a child, but I haven't had the chance to get a job where I can use English.
It's really hard to me ,so far.  It has been really hard for me so far.
Because, I feel ashamed, but my English isn't perfect .  I feel ashamed because my English isn't perfect.
I have to study it myself everyday. I have to study English by myself every day.
and also I need knowlage for kids.  I don't understand what you are trying to say.
There are a bunch of types of kids. There are many different types of kids.
I can't contral them sometimes. I can't control them sometimes.
They are really freedom, yes, ofcause they are!  I don't understand what you are trying to say.
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