香港に行ったことありますか？
皆さん、香港に行ったことありますか？中国人観光客の多くは買い物をするために、香港にいくのだと、今日、気が付きました。特にお金持ちの中国人。
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香港に行ったことはありますか？
皆さん、香港に行ったことありますか？中国人観光客の多くは買い物をするために
# Well done. Three corrections are not for correction but for better expression.
# The reason I deleted katakana comma (、）, I think the avberbia clause (買い物をするために) and the verb the clause modifies (・・にいく) are very close. To place three comma in the above sentence, 「中国人観光客の多くは、」 would be better because the subject word is always independent. However, these are very subltle stuff.
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