Linda's notebook entry: Jun 24, 2010
I stood by the window, quietly looked up
Blue sky in the clouds like most of your face
I would like to touch a hand
You are floating away the
Gently leaving only a trace of Winston
Dear, under the same sky
Can you feel my longing
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Nice Poetry!
About correction i am not in that level to find... but i learn new words in your poetry.
Good Luck
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I think I should learn more words from other people .I will study hard
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Beautiful poetry. no correction possible. Your skill with English is amazing.
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softly
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me speechless ,Sky is strange.
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