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sophy's notebook entry: Jun 01, 2011 There were something sad happened a few days ago. When my parents told me the news today, I shocked and felt sorrowful. The news let me know that fate is changeable. How fragile is human’s life! Sometimes fate would even hurt people in an extremely cruel way. All of us don’t know when and where we will say goodbye to our families and friends. Maybe all I can do is to cherish my families and friends. Let them know that I really care about and love them. Especially my parents, I will always love them with all I have. I’m so touch and grateful for everything they have done for me in 23 years. The sad news makes me understand that success is not fame, money or power. Success is that you can give happiness to the people who you love.

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Sophy's notebook entry: Jun 01, 2011

Something sad happened a few days ago. When my parents told me the news today, I was shocked and sorrowful.
The news let me know that fate is changeable. How fragile human’s life is! Sometimes fate would even hurt people in an extremely cruel way. None of us know when and where we will have to say goodbye to our families and friends.
Maybe all I can do is to cherish my family and friends. To let them know that I really care about them and love them. Especially my parents, I will always love them with all my heart*. I’m so touched and grateful for everything they have done for me in 23 years.
The sad news made me understand that success is not fame, money or power. Success is that you can give happiness to the people you love.


**Suggestion!

**Good job!!  Regards!! :D

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