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are these correct sentences? The Rhinoceros beetle that my son bought in this Summer was laying a egg. Although he did not look after it especially, the egg is larvae now. I am lookingk forward to the adult Rhinoceros beetle come out of the soil next year.

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are these correct sentences?

The rhinoceros beetle that my son bought in this summer was laying has laid a an egg.
Although he did not look after it especially (1), the egg is has now hatched into a larvae now.
I am lookingk forward to seeing the adult rhinoceros beetle come out of the soil next year.


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(1) Although he did not take especially good care of it, ...

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Are these sentences correct?

The rhinoceros beetle that my son bought in this summer has laid(1) an egg.
Although he did not look after it especially, the egg is a larva(2) now.(3)
I am looking k forward to the adult rhinoceros beetle coming(4) out of the soil next year.

(1) Present perfect tense, because this has happened and you can see the result.

(2) [egg is a larva] = 1, [eggs are larvae] = many. I think only 1 hatches from each egg, right?

(3) More natural: [Although he did not especially look after it, the egg has hatched into a larva.]

(4) to look forward to + ~ing verb

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