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IMPACTS OF SOCIAL MEDIA Hello all fellows This is my first attempt for writing and I hope I'll be respond and corrcet. anyhow I'm today,writing upon the topic: IMPACTS OF SOCIAL MEDIA As we have been living in the 21st century and this is a modern era.In now a days, almost,every person spends 2 to 3 hours on social media.It's terrible,however,It might be fruitful.It depends upon our use. There are different kinds of social media like whatsapp,facebok and twiter etc.But the commonly used one is facebook. ADVANTAGES OF SOCIAL MEDIA We can get so many advantages from social media.We can share our Ideas with others.We can stay connected with our relatives,friends almost in all over the world.We can be aware of what is going on in our surroundings as well as in over the world. DISADVANTAGES OF SOCIAL MEDIA As I mentioned,social media has not only advantages but also many disadvantages.It is the cause of time wasting. It can cause of the leakage of privacy.

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Hello all fellows This is my first attempt for writing and I hope I'll be respond and corrcet. anyhow I'm today,writing upon the topic: IMPACTS OF SOCIAL MEDIA As we have been living in the 21st century and this is a modern era.Nowadays, almost,every person spends 2 to 3 hours on social media.It's terrible,however,It might be fruitful.It depends upon our use. There are different kinds of social media like whatsapp,facebok and twiter.But the commonly used one is facebook. ADVANTAGES OF SOCIAL MEDIA: We can get so many advantages from social media.We can share our Ideas with others.We can stay connected with our relatives,friends almost in all over the world.We can be aware of what is going on in our surroundings as well as in over the world. DISADVANTAGES OF SOCIAL MEDIA: As I mentioned,social media has not only advantages but also many disadvantages.It causes time wasting. It can lead to leakage of privacy.
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Bravo Raja.. Useful subject and very good practice. Hope my correction finds you [emoji]

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