Simplified language.
I'd like to introduce to the dear customer the overall concept of the project I lead.
The task that was set to my Design Institute and me as a Project Manager is to perform the research of the pile foundation and further according to the research results to offer at least two possible ways reconstruction of the doc with the cost estimation.
So, we performed the research of both part of piles - above water and below-water.
Verdict: pile foundations of both sides has an unsatisfactory condition.
The concrete of the piles during 50 years of operation underwent pernicious impact of the sea water.
I'd like to draw your attention to the part of the piles continually changes the environment - at the junction of the seawater and air caused by sea waves.
At this place, we can see the intensive wear of the concrete.
So, we've estimated two possible ways around the problem:
- Total disassembling the piles of the doc at one stage and construction the new one
- Partial disassembling with the state-keeping the technological process.
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Simplified Language.
I'd like to introduce to a[1] customer the overall concept of the project I lead.The task that was sent [I assume you meant "sent"] to my Design Institute and me as a Project Manager is to perform the research for a pile foundation and further, according to the research results, to offer at least two possible ways to reconstruct the dock with cost estimations.
So, we performed the research of both part of piles - above water and below-water.
Verdict: pile foundations of both sides have an unsatisfactory condition.
The concrete of the piles during 50 years of operation underwent pernicious impact due to sea water.
I'd like to draw your attention to the part of the piles continually challenged by the environment - at the water surface level caused by sea waves. At this place, we can see intensive wear on the concrete.
So, we've established two possible ways around the problem:
1. Total disassembling the piles of the dock at one stage followed by construction of a new one
2. Partial disassembling with the state-keeping the technological process [2]
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[1. In English we only use "dear" to describe very close family or friends. The one exception is in the salutation at the start of a letter: "Dear Mr. Smith".
2. This sentence is not clear to me. Perhaps you meant: "Partial disassembling of the pier followed by reconstruction to upgrade it to modern standards of materials and strength."]
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