ぴっざ ^_^「pizza 何じですか？に時ではありますか？いいえ！三時でわありますか？いいえ！四つ時はありません。 今日ぴっざたべます。私はピザがほし。^_^ 好きぴっざです。 *anyone who corrects, can you please also provide Romaji! ありがとう！ EDIT: what time is it? Is it 2 o'clock?

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ぴっざ ^_^「pizza 何じですか？に時ではありますか？いいえ！三時でわありますか？いいえ！四つ時はありません。今日ぴっざたべます。私はピザがほし。^_^ 好きぴっざです。 *anyone who corrects, can you please also provide Romaji! ありがとう！ EDIT: what time is it? Is it 2 o'clock? No! Is it three o'clock! No! It is 4 oclock. I will eat pizza. I am having pizza (I don't know why I said this twice, I must have gotten distracted). I like pizza.

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ぴっざ ^_^「pizza (We would say 「ピザ piza」）

何じですか？に（二）時ではありますか（すか suka ）？いいえ！三時でわありますか（すか suka ）？いいえ！四つ時はありません（四時です。yoji desu for "It is 4 o'clock)

今日ぴっざ（ピザを piza wo ）たべます。

私はピザがほし。^_^ 好きぴっざです。

（I think you could just write 「私はピザがすきです。watashiwa pizaga sukidesu )」 for "I like pizza".

*anyone who corrects, can you please also provide Romaji! ありがとう！

EDIT: what time is it? Is it 2 o'clock? No! Is it three o'clock! No! It is 4 oclock.

I will eat pizza. I am having pizza (I don't know why I said this twice, I must have gotten distracted). I like pizza.

Is my correction easy enough for you to understand? Your text isn't so bad. Please tell me if you need more explanation.

Sure! Hold on, I'll edit it. There, done! Boy it must be really bad LOL

Could you provide us an English transcript as well? I think in that way we could do a better correction.

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