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THINGS THAT NEED TO BE DONE ABOUT CLIMATE CHANGE WRITE AN ESSAY FOR YOUR TUTOR DISCUSSING TWO OF THE THINGS THAT NEED TO BE DONE ABOUT CLIMATE CHANGE IN YOUR NOTES. YOU SHOULD EXPLAIN WHICH YOU THINK IS MORE IMPORTANT, PROVIDING REASONS TO SUPPORT YOU OPINION. YOU HAVE ATTENDED A RADIO DISCUSSSION ON WHAT NEEDS TO BE DONE ABOUT CLIMATE CHANGE. YOU HAVE MADE THE NOTES BELOW. WHAT NEEDS TO BE DONE ABOUT THE CLIMATE CHANGE: • SCIENTIFIC RESEARCH • LEGISLATION • EDUCATION SOME OPINIONS EXPRESSED IN THE DISCUSSION: • WE NEED MORE SCIENTIFIC EVIDENCE TO KNOW EXACTLY HOW SIGNIFICANT CLIMATE CHANGE REALLY IS. • GOVERNMENTS HAVE TO TAKE ACTION FOR THERE TO BE ANY REAL IMPROVEMENTS. • PEOPLE MUST BE MADE MORE AWARE OF THE PROBLEM. Usually people find that the climate change is an invent of the important companys to increase their benefits and sell new expensive alternatives, however a recent inform by the University of Illinois has shown that the climate is truly changing, and it´s happening faster and more dangerous than people is used to consider. So in order to avoid future desasters, the aim of this essay is discuss two possible approaches. Firstly, It´s well know that the legislation is one of the more powerful tools of the countries. In the hypothetical case that the biggest goverments, like USA or China, would decide to make face to this universal problem, a global legislation was one of the best possible options. Thanks to the law, it could be possible to fix limited amounts and punish to all of these who exceed it. Secondly, the citizens need to understand and be more aware of the problem. To change the bad habits and to implement less contaminating resources in our daily life is important to develop the education of the children and young people. Furthermore, the new generations will be encharged to discover new energies, reuse the materials and find better solutions, then the education is the key to create a better future. To sum up, as i explained before, through these two simple ideas we can get a considerable reduction of the climate change at the same time that we are implementig the bases to a better world. I really hope that they would be put in practise.

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THINGS THAT NEED TO BE DONE ABOUT CLIMATE CHANGE

WRITE AN ESSAY FOR YOUR TUTOR DISCUSSING TWO OF THE THINGS THAT NEED TO BE DONE ABOUT CLIMATE CHANGE IN YOUR NOTES. YOU SHOULD EXPLAIN WHICH YOU THINK IS MORE IMPORTANT, PROVIDING REASONS TO SUPPORT YOU OPINION.

YOU HAVE ATTENDED A RADIO DISCUSSSION ON WHAT NEEDS TO BE DONE ABOUT CLIMATE CHANGE. YOU HAVE MADE THE NOTES BELOW.

WHAT NEEDS TO BE DONE ABOUT THE CLIMATE CHANGE:
• SCIENTIFIC RESEARCH
• LEGISLATION
• EDUCATION

SOME OPINIONS EXPRESSED IN THE DISCUSSION:
• WE NEED MORE SCIENTIFIC EVIDENCE TO KNOW EXACTLY HOW SIGNIFICANT CLIMATE CHANGE REALLY IS.
• GOVERNMENTS HAVE TO TAKE ACTION FOR THERE TO BE ANY REAL IMPROVEMENTS.
• PEOPLE MUST BE MADE MORE AWARE OF THE PROBLEM.



Usually people find that climate change is an invention of important companys to increase their profits and sell new expensive alternatives. However, recent information from the University of Illinois has shown that the climate is truly changing, and it is happening faster and more dangerously than we had thought. So in order to avoid future desasters, the aim of this essay is discuss two possible approaches.

Firstly, it is well-known that legislation is one of the more powerful State tools. In the hypothetical case that the biggest goverments, like USA or China, decided to face up to this global problem, a global legislation would be one of the best possible options. Thanks to the law, it could be possible to fix limited pollution amounts and punish all those who exceed it.

Secondly, citizens* need to understand and be more aware of the problem. To change bad* habits and to implement less contaminating resources in our daily life it is important to educate children and young people. Furthermore, new* generations will be enabled to discover new energies, reuse materials* and find better solutions, then education* is the key to create a better future.

To sum up, as I explained before, through these two simple ideas we can considerably reduce climate change at the same time that we are implementing the bases for a better world. I really hope that these can be put in practise.

*English, unlike French, Spanish, German etc, always writes citizens, hope, faith, peace, ... instead of les citoyens, l'esperance, die Glaube, ... without the article for abstract nouns.

Very well written!

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