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Could you check and correct my script ? I'm a Japanese student. My English class give me a homework. But my English is very poor. So could you please check and correct my script ? You don't have to check the whole script.

Methods and Date

In, 2006, Sinya Yamanaka conducted an experient. 4 factors were introduced into a somatic cell of a mouse and it was intialized. 4 factors were introduced into a somatic cell of a human and it was intialized. Without using a cancer cell, thoe iPs cells were established.

Conclusion and Future

Research Sinya`s work was a tremendous success.This work will help regenerative medicine and developing a medicine In 2012, he won Noblel prize.

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Could you check and correct my script ?

I'm a Japanese student. My English class give me a homework. But my English is very poor. So could you please check and correct my script ? You don't have to check the whole script.

Methods and Date

In, 2006, Sinya Yamanaka conducted an experient. 4 factors were introduced into a somatic cell of a mouse and it was intialized. 4 factors were introduced into a somatic cell of a human and it was intialized. Without using a cancer cell, thoe iPs cells were established.

Conclusion and Future

Research Sinya`s work was a tremendous success.This work will help regenerative medicine and developing a medicine In 2012, he won Noblel prize.

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In 2006, Sinya Yamanaka conducted an experient. 4 factors were introduced into a somatic cell of a mouse and it was initialised. 4 factors were introduced into a somatic cell of a human and it was initialised. Without using a cancer cell, those iPs cells were established.

Conclusion and Future

Researcher Sinya`s work was a tremendous success.This work will help to  regenerative medicine and to develop a medicine. In 2012, he won Noblel prize.

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