About depression Recently, depression by stress is increasing. In America, patient with depression is one in 15 people. Moreover, this cause isn't understood and there're variety of hypothesis. So mos

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About depression Recently, depression by stress is increasing. In America, patient with depression is one in 15 people. Moreover, this cause isn't understood and there're variety of hypothesis. So most popular method of treatment is taking rest or drug therapy. But now, this spiritual sickness can get well to do gene therapy. According to "Science Traditional Medicine" which is a medical journal, missing protein called ''p11" greatly effect for depression. Mr. Michael Kaplitt said "I think psychological disorder like depression by putting properly quantity of "p11" back.

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About depression

Recently, depression caused by stress is increasing. In America, one out of fifteen patients suffer from depression. Moreover, this cause isn't understood there are a variety of hypotheses. The most popular method of treatment is taking rest or drug therapy. But now, this illness spiritual sickness can be treated with gene therapy. According to the medical journal "Science Traditional Medicine" missing protein called ''p11" greatly affects depression. Mr. Michael Kaplitt said "I think psychological disorder like depression by putting properly quantity of "p11" back

Unclear what "this cause isn't understood" the cause of what? depression?

taking rest -- not sure what you mean. Also, I have NEVER heard of this as a cure for depression!!!!!!!!!!!!!!. Talk therapy + medication are the two main forms of treatment.

The term "spiritual sickness" is used to talk about morals and religion in English. You want to use illness or mental illness instead.

there're -- you cannot contract these two words: use there are. (you CAN contract there + is = there's)

missing protein called ''p11" greatly affects depression = what does the protein p11 do. Then you can say that when people don't have enough of this protein, it can cause depression.

Mr. Michael Kaplitt said "I think psychological disorder like depression by putting properly quantity of "p11" back this quote doesn't make any sense. Go back and see what the quote says, it seems to be missing information. Also, you need to identify who Mr. Michael Kaplitt is... (a doctor, a researcher, working where? ) so Mr, X, a (profession) at (place)

Thank you, Andre! I'm glad!

Perfect text! I'm not a native but good job!

Thank you! Is there a mistake on the other ? If you have time, Could you correct my English sentence?

depression from stress is increasing

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