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I went for an interview yesterday, the office of that company locates in a very central place and it seems like a really good company, actually it is. I presented my ID and then I got a card of invitation. it is said that there are two floors belonging to this company, and when I arrived at the appointed place, 11th floor, I can’t enter into their office, there is no button for opening the door, and just people who work inside can get in. Unfortunately, I guess the director and HR forgot this interview with me, coz we scheduled it before Chinese National day, which means one week ago. Lately, another girl who worked with this director gave the interview to me. During the whole process, I felt okay, I’ve said a lot about myself, and to my surprise, she didn't ask me some professional questions. whatever, I really hope to work with them and be economically independent as soon as possible.
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Life pieces 1/100
I went for an interview yesterday, the office of that company locates in a very central place and it seems like a really good company, actually it is. I presented my ID and then I got a card of invitation. it is said that there are two floors belonging to this company, and when I arrived at the appointed place, 11th floor, I can’t enter into their office, there is no button for opening the door, and just people who work inside can get in. Unfortunately, I guess the director and HR forgot this interview with me, because we scheduled it before Chinese National day, which was one week ago. Lately, another girl who worked with this director gave the interview to me. During the whole process, I felt okay. I said a lot about myself_and, to my surprise, she didn't ask me any professional questions. Whatever happens, I really hope to work with them and be financially independent as soon as possible.Hi :)
There's some nice language and ideas here and you express yourself well in some sentences.
Here are some tips :
1. Make your sentences shorter. A sentence should be about 22 words long at most.
2. You're telling a story about what happened to you in the past - so keep all verbs about the event in the past tense.
Here are corrections of some sentences you wrote - let me know if you have any questions :)
I don't understand the parts I've highlighted in blue. Can you explain them to me?
I went for an interview yesterday. It was in an office of a well respected company and is located in the city centre. I presented my ID and got a card of invitation.
When I arrived at the 11th floor for my interview, I couldn't enter the office because there was no button for opening the door. Only people who worked in the office could get inside.
Fortunately, another girl who worked with this director gave the interview to me instead.
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