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Please tell me the problems in it, and could you please make it more written and beautiful? Thanks! Influenced by my parents who are both from science and engineering background, I’m good at logical thinking. And thanks to the strong cultural atmosphere of my high school, Shandong Experimental High School, and the variety of opportunities it offered to develop interests, I joined the campus magazine and studied at the multimedia software elective course offered by the school. All this became the beginning of my real contact and understanding of the media and related techniques. I love playing my own ideas, combining the image, text, sound, video and so on to create pleasant, nice and fun things, which makes me feel excited and a sense of achievement from the heart. At that time, although multimedia technique was just a hobby to me, I still spent a lot of spare time learning it carefully and systematically. Among the three years in senior high school except for a few months before the college entrance examination, I kept studying Adobe Photoshop, Audition, and Premiere as a recreation for most of the weekends. I know how to get the right tutorial and material from the Internet, and I have the patience to figure out the steps and repeat practicing to ensure mastery. This self-learning habit has been maintained so far. Although I just took it as a hobby and a way of relaxing, it proved to lay a good technical and aesthetic foundation for my subsequent professional studying.

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Please tell me the problems in it, and could you please make it more written and beautiful? Thanks!

Influenced by my parents who come from a science and engineering background, I’m good at logical thinking. And thanks to the strong cultural atmosphere of my school, Shandong Experimental High School, and the many chances it gave us to develop our interests, I joined the campus magazine and studied at the multimedia software (elective?) course offered by the school. This was the beginning of a proper contact and understanding of media and allied techniques.

I love playing with my own ideas, combining image, text, sound, video and so on to create pleasant, nice and fun things, which makes me feel excited and completely satisfied. At that time, although multimedia techniques were just a hobby, I still spent a lot of spare time learning them in depth. All through my three years in senior high school, excepting a few months, I studied Adobe Photoshop, Audition, and Premiere as a recreation on most weekends. I know how to get the right tutorial and material from the Internet, and I have the patience to figure out the steps and repeat until I master it. This self-learning habit has been maintained so far. Although I just took it as a hobby and a way of relaxing, it proved to lay a good technical and aesthetic foundation for my subsequent professional studies.

Very well written!

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