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Where I Live In Hi. I am japanese, and live in Hiroshima. Do you know Hiroshima? Hiroshima has a past of tragedy. What it means is that the atomic bomb was dropped for the first time in the world. A building which is named Genbakudome(it means atomic bomb dome) is still present now because of not to repeat past tragedy. Now, it becomes sightseeng spot so that many tourists including foreighners visit there. By the way, Barack Hussein Obama also visited there. I will wright the notebook about other sightseeng spots someday.

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Where I Live 

Hi. I am Japanese and live in Hiroshima. Do you know Hiroshima? Hiroshima has a tragic past. What it means is that the atomic bomb was dropped there for the first time in the world. A building named Genbakudome, meaning 'atomic bomb dome', is still present now so that we remember and do not repeat past tragedy. Now, it has become a sightseeing spot so that many tourists including foreigners visit there. By the way, Barack Hussein Obama also visited there. I will write in the notebook about other sightseeing spots someday.

Very well written!

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Thank you for coments kenny. I also like Perfume very much. Of course I putting their songs on the car stereo.
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I fell in love with Perfume when I was a teenager. Since then, I got to like Hiroshima more and more. Look forward to see more updates on Hiroshima writing. Thanks!

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