Is it ok? what do you think? :) thank's for your help!
I would like to use the knowledge I acquired during my studies while I am improving my skills in different areas. I am interested in growing professionally in personnel management and in improving my organisation skills. Moreover, I would like to gain experience in economic and customer relationship fields.
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Is it ok? what do you think? :) thanks for your help!
I would like to use the knowledge I acquired during my studies, while I am also improving my skills in different areas. I am interested in growing professionally in (the field of) personnel management and in as well was improving my organisation skills. Moreover, I would also like to gain experience in the fields of economics and customer relationship fields.** We tend to not use the word moreover.. You could say 'In addition' or 'Furthermore', although they are quite formal.. you could just say 'also', or use the phrase 'as well as this'. Another good phrase that is less formal is 'On top of this..'
As well as this, I would like to gain experience..
On top of this, I would like to gain experience..
I hope that helps!
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