<<changes in my life>>
Please can you find out mistakes for me. Thank you very much
I believe that everyone has some key points where their life is changed. Of course, me too. In my memory of study, the most important point is in primary school. When i am a child, i like dancing, watching tv, playing games and so on without studying. Maybe i think that study is a hard and boring work for me and i dislike it. However, everything was changed when i saw the picture where my parents worked so hard and nobody could help them, which made me shock and touch. From that time, i kept a promise that i will make my effort to studying to let my parents happy.
I think it is so special because my life and idea have dramatically changed. I do not know whether someone has this experience. But I think it is unforgettable.

