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Written English Exercise !Any advice would be appreciated ! For the first time, I walked into the wrong classroom though I reminded myself of the room number many times.

It was the toughest time of the week. The teacher was a outgoing and open-minded man with the shiny black hair all the time. But for me, his good and tidy appearance couldn't save the pronunciation which was described as a flavor of fish balls by the classmate.A nightmare I think. He always cut the sentence into pieces and stopped in the halfway with "eee".So I almost never caught what he had really said and followed his steps successfully. Plus he always forgot to take the macro phone with him and seemed to enjoy walking far away from us. As a consequence I couldn't hear even a word.

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Written English Exercise! Any advice would be appreciated!

For The first time I went to class, I walked into the wrong classroom even though I reminded myself of the room number many times.

It was the toughest time of the week. The teacher was an outgoing and open-minded man with the shinyshiniest black hair of all the time. But for me, his good and tidy appearance couldn't save the his pronunciation (which was a classmate described as a the flavor of fish balls by the classmate.) It was a nightmare, I think. He always cut the sentence into pieces and stopped in the halfway with "eee", so I almost never caught what he had really said and followed couldn't follow his steps successfully. Plus he always forgot to take the macro phone microphone with him and seemed to enjoy walking far away from us. As a consequence I couldn't hear even a single word.


[We don't say "good appearance" in English.You could say "neat" or "well groomed" instead.]

["A nightmare, I think" --> "It was a nightmare" sounds more natural]

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