Composition 5b
Please correct any grammatical errors of my writing. It’s for high school students, so sentences should not be so complicated. thanks!
The entrance exam for university has changed over this ten years in order to meet the needs from society.
Because the number of the children is rapidly decreasing in a few years and people lives longer then the average age to live to got higher, a lot of problems has been happening now.
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The entrance exam for university has changed over the past ten years in order to meet the needs of society. Because the number of children is rapidly decreasing over the years and people are living longer then the average age (or *the life expectancy is increasing each year*), a lot of problems are happening now.
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Thanks for commenting Sarah. Please don't hesitate to correct mistakes. If you gave me a better option, it would help me a lot!
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There is a grammatical error but since you said it for high school student i'm a little too nervous to correct it.
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