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I am obsessed with listening to music. Listening to some beautiful music is very relaxing and interesting, which can release my pressure. I listen to music almost every day, I especially like listening to music deep in the night before I go to bed. It often helps me to have a sound sleep. I prefer pop music. I clearly remember I was watching an interesting TV program called ‘Happy Camp’ with my roommates when I was a freshman at university. At that time, I heard a beautiful song called The Only Flower In The World. It is one of the Japanese longest running idol group SMAP’s songs. After that I have fallen in love with pop music. I’m looking forward to attending their concert in the future.
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Music(Could yu please look over my essay for me?)
I am obsessed with listening to music. Listening to some beautiful music is very relaxing and interesting, which can release my pressure. I listen to music almost every day, I especially like listening to music deep in the night before I go to bed. It often helps me to have a sound sleep. I prefer pop music. I clearly remember I was watching an interesting TV program called ‘Happy Camp’ with my roommates when I was a freshman at university. At that time, I heard a beautiful song called The Only Flower In The World. It is one of the Japanese longest running idol group SMAP’s songs. After that I fell in love with pop music. I’m looking forward to attending their concert in the future.Want to progress faster?
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