Hi! Nice to meet you!
This is my first time writing on notebook. Nice to meet you!
I love listening to foreign music.
I got into System Of A Down these days.
When I was listening to their song named sugar, l couldn't understand what he sings because he shouts, so l looked up its lyrics. Then, l found he sings '' The kombucha mushroom people''. l couldn't understand more and more because Kombucha is Japanese hot drink hahaha.
Do anyone know that lyrics mean?
Their songs are really cool! l think they sing thoughtfulness songs, so l wanna understand what they want to tell us by watching lyrics video of their songs on youtube.
l also love watching foreign movies.
One of the most favorite movie is The Secret Life Of Walter Mitty. The story was so magnificent. l was inspired by it and l thought l'd love to travel like him!!
Could someone correct my sentence?
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Hi! Nice to meet you!
This is my first time writing on notebook. Nice to meet you!I love listening to foreign music.
I got into "System Of A Down" these days.
When I was listening to their song named "Sugar", l couldn't understand what he was singing because he shouts, so l looked up its lyrics. Then, l found he sings ''The Kombucha Mushroom People''. l couldn't understand much of it because Kombucha is Japanese hot drink hahaha.
Does anyone know what that lyric means?
Their songs are really cool! l think they sing thoughtful songs, so l want to understand what they want to tell us by watching video lyrics video of their songs on Youtube.
l also love watching foreign movies.
One of my the most favorite movie is "The Secret Life Of Walter Mitty". The story was so magnificent. l was inspired by it and l thought l'd love to travel like him!
Could someone correct my sentence?
Now, that wasn't so bad! You are doing well. It's better to quote songs or lyrics.
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Hi! Nice to meet you!
This is my first time writing on notebook. Nice to meet you!I love listening to foreign music.
I got into System Of A Down these days.
When I was listening to their song named sugar, l couldn't understand what he sings because he shouts, so l looked up its lyrics. Then, l found he sings '' The kombucha mushroom people''. l couldn't understand more and more because Kombucha is Japanese hot drink hahaha.
Do anyone know that lyrics mean?
Their songs are really cool! l think they sing thoughtfulness songs, so l wanna understand what they want to tell us by watching lyrics video of their songs on youtube.
l also love watching foreign movies.
One of the most favorite movie is The Secret Life Of Walter Mitty. The story was so magnificent. l was inspired by it and l thought l'd love to travel like him!!
Could someone correct my sentence?
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