A Beach Day
I went to the beach yesterday with my friends who have rent a house nearby. We took the local train, and luckly there were not crowded and both of us have a seat. We have a chat on the train, and after one and helf hour then we arrive.
Beacuse it's Monday, there were not much people, and it was a sunny day with the tender wind. The wave were big, so some sufer went there and enjoy surfing. Sometime we played in the water, and sometimes we just sat at the beach drinking beer.Even We stsy whole day doing nothing and got sunburn, but fill of happyness in mind."What a wondrful life it is" i thought.
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A Beach Day
I went to the beach yesterday with my friends who have a rental a house nearby. We took the local train, and luckily there they were not crowded and both of us have had a seat. We have had a chat on the train, and after one and a half hours then we arrived. (You can also say 'an hour and a half')Because it's it was (it's is an contraction of 'it is') Monday, there were not much many people, and it was a sunny day with the tender wind a gentle breeze. The waves were big, so some surfers went there and enjoyed surfing. Sometime we played in the water, and sometimes we just sat at the beach drinking beer. Even though we stsy spent the whole day doing nothing and besides getting sunburned, I had nothing but the fill feeling of happiness in mind. "What a wonderful life it is," I thought.
Great job! It's always tricky speaking about the past tense. I liked your story, sounds like you had a great time!
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A Beach Day
I went to the beach yesterday with my friends who have rented a house nearby. We took the local train and luckily, there were it was not crowded and both of us have had a seats. We have had a chat on the train, and after one and a half hour, then we arrived.Beacuse Since it was Monday, there were not many people, and it was a sunny day with the tender wind. The waves were big, so some sufers went there and to enjoy surfing. Sometimes, we played in the water, and sometimes we just sat at the beach drinking beers. Even though we spent whole day doing nothing and got sunburned, but I still felt fill of happiness in my mind, thinking, "What a wonderful life it is!" i thought.
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I went to the beach yesterday with my friends who have rent a house nearby. We took the local train, and "we were lucky , the train wasn't crowded " and both of us have a seat. We "had" a chat on the train, and " after one hour and a half " then we arrive.
"Because" it's Monday, there were not much people, and it was a sunny day with the tender wind. The wave were big, so some "surfer" went there and enjoy surfing. Sometime we played in the water, and sometimes we just sat at the beach drinking beer.Even We "stay" whole day doing nothing and got sunburn, but fill of "happiness" in mind."what a wonderful day it was" .
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