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September 13th, 2017 Yesterday I started to write my journal/diary(still trying to get the difference between them) so I can practice my english vocabulary, ‘cause if I don’t , I will probably loose a great portion of what I have learned so far. So here I go with my 2nd entry: Today, I got up a little bit tired because I stayed up late last night painting the bathroom. It´s looking pretty good, it´s a green-lemon tone...it used to be white. Before I took a shower, I cooked some chilean stovetop bread(churrasca) and flavored it with oregano. That took me just 15 minutes. Because I was painting the bathroom I didn’t prepare lunch last night so I had to take a tuna can and a tomato so I wouldn´t starve at work...I just ate that with a churrasca...it left me pretty satisfied. Right now it’s 07:30 pm and I’m working till 09:00 pm or so...I’m working over time. So I’m really anxious to get home and finish the painting before my daughter’s birthday party. We should have a blast this Friday...can´t wait. Over and out!

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September 13th, 2017

Yesterday I started to write my journal/diary (still trying to get the difference between them) so I can practice my English vocabulary, ‘cause if I don’t , I will probably loose a great portion of what I have learned so far. So here I go with my 2nd entry: Today, I got up a little bit tired because I stayed up late last night painting the bathroom. It´s looking pretty good, it´s a green-lemon tone...it used to be white. Before I took a shower, I cooked some Chilean stovetop bread (churrasca) and flavored it with oregano. That took me just 15 minutes. Because I was painting the bathroom I didn’t prepare lunch last night so I had to take a tuna can and a tomato so I wouldn´t starve at work...I just ate that with a churrasca...it left me pretty satisfied. Right now it’s 07:30 pm and I’m working till 09:00 pm or so...I’m working over time. So I’m really anxious to get home and finish the painting before my daughter’s birthday party. We should have a blast this Friday...can´t wait. Over and out!

Check out the difference between journal and diary at

 https://english.stackexchange.com/questions/70519/whats-the-difference-between-diary-and-journal

You are doing very well. Just a few things. Take a look at when to use capital letters

https://www.englishclub.com/writing/capital-letters.htm 

If you follow it, you'll be writing near perfect English that I'd be jealous of. But keep writing. 


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