Kazoku minna de totta shashin
Ima wa kakinagara shashin wo mite imasu. Kore wa chichi no tanjoubi ni kazoku minna de totta shashin desu. Ichiban migi ni tanjoubi no okurimono wo mite iru no wa chichi desu. Majime na sou desu. Otousan wa se ga ookikute yasete imasu. Chchi ni tonari ni iru ue no otouto desu. Otouto kami ga mijikakute shiroi desu. Jitsu watashi wa kazoku no naka de kami ga nagai dake desu. Mae ni shita no otousan desu. Otousan wa suppotsu ga tokui de sakka ya sukasshu nado shite imasu. Shashin de wa otousan no okusan mo ue no otousan no okusan mo futari no mei mo imasu. Ue no mei ga haha ni yoku nite ite shita no mei ga chichi ni yoku nite imasu. Futari no mei ga megane wo kakette imasu.
Oba wa ryouri wo tsukurimashita. Oishikatta desu. Kazoku minna ga ureshikatta desu. Chchi ga nana juu sai desu (70).
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Kazoku minna de totta shashin
Ima watashi wa shashin wo minagara kono no-towo kaite iimasu. Kore wa chichi no tanjoubi ni kazoku minna de totta shashin desu. Ichiban migi de tanjoubi no okurimono wo mite iru no ga chichi desu. Majime na sou desu. Chichi wa se ga takaikute yasete imasu. Chchi no tonari ni iru no ga (watashi no? / chichi no?) ue no otouto desu. Otouto wa kami ga mijikakute iro ga shiroi desu. Watashi dake ga kazoku no naka de kami ga nagai desu. Mae ni utsutteiru no ga shita no otousan (otouto?) desu. Otousan (? wa suppo-tsu ga tokui de, sakka- ya sukasshu nado wo shite imasu. Shashin ni wa chichi no okusan mo ue no otousan(?) no okusan mo futari no mei mo utsutte imasu. Ue no mei ga (watashi no?) haha ni yoku nite ite, shita no mei ga (watashi no?)chichi ni yoku nite imasu. Futari no mei ga &megane wo kakette imasu.Oba wa ryouri wo tsukurimashita. Oishikatta desu. Kazoku minna ga ureshikatta desu. Chchi wa nana jussai desu (70).
Bon travail ! There are some parts that I need a bit more context. Espère que cela vous aidera.
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Kazoku minna de totta shashin
Ima wa kakinagara shashin wo mite imasu. Kore wa chichi no tanjoubi ni kazoku minna de totta shashin desu. Ichiban migi nide tanjoubi no okurimono wo mite iru no wa chichi desu. Majime na sou desu. Otousan wa se ga ookikute(takakute) yasete imasu. Chichi nino tonari ni iru nowa ue no otouto desu. Otouto wa kami ga mijikakute shiroi desu. Jitsuwa watashi wa dake ga kazoku no naka de kami ga nagai dake desu. Mae ni iru nowa shita no otousanto desu. Otousan wa suppotsu ga tokui de sakka ya sukasshu nado o shite imasu. Shashin de wa otousan no okusan mo ue no otousanto no okusan mo futari no mei mo imasu. Ue no mei ga haha ni yoku nite ite shita no mei ga chichi ni yoku nite imasu. Futari no mei gawa hutari tomo megane wo kakette imasu.Oba wa ryouri wo tsukurimashita. Oishikatta desu. Kazoku minna ga ureshikatta desuyorokonde imashita. Chichi ga nana juu sai( nana jissai) no toki desu (70).
Hello Manu. Your Japanese sounds very natural. I'm wondering, I could see that photo!
I'm a bit confused with several parts of "otousan" and "otouto", so I just tried to make a coherent story. I'm sorry if I made a mistake about that.
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