A Funny Fact That Went On With Me And My Little Brother
My six years old brother was doing his homework as we saw he had written the number three backwards, just like the letter E. So my dad corrected him. Then I laughed, not because of his mistake but because that was a funny situation. And I said "you miswrote that bro". Then he said "hey, everybody makes mistakes. So do you!". And I said "thats true bro, I do make mistakes either". And then I was like "what a shame, my six years old brother had to teach me stuff life-wise". But I was happy because he reacted that way, I could've drained his confidence laughing at him, but he acted like a big boy! I'm so proud of him. In the other hand, I learned that we have to watch our acts dealing with children, because even a little thing we do might hurt them and reflects in their future, and you know, we don't wanna say "woulda coulda shoulda" someday.
I would be glad if someone corrects it to me.
Thanks in advance.
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A funny Fact conversation that happened Went On between With me And my little brother
My six years old brother was doing his homework as we saw he had written the number three backwards, just like the letter E. So my dad corrected him. Then I laughed, not because of his mistake, but because that was a funny situation. And I said "you miswrote that bro." Then he said "hey, everybody makes mistakes. So do you!". And I said "that's true bro, I do make mistakes too.". And then I thought was like "what a shame, my six years old brother had to teach me fact about life stuff life-wise". But I was happy that because he reacted that way. I could've drained his confidence by laughing at him, but he acted like a big boy! I'm so proud of him. In On the other hand, I learned that we have to watch our acts dealing with children, because even a little thing we do might hurt them and reflects in their future, and you know, we don't wanna say "woulda coulda shoulda" someday.I would be glad if someone corrects it to me.
Thanks in advance.
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A Funny Fact that Went on with Me and My little Brother
My six year old brother was doing his homework and we saw he had written the number three backwards, just like the letter E, so my dad corrected him. Then I laughed, not because of his mistake but because that was a funny situation. And I said "you miswrote that bro". Then he said "Hey, everybody makes mistakes. So do you!". And I said "that's true bro, I do make mistakes too either". And then I was like "what a shame, my six years old brother had to teach me stuff life-wise". But I was happy because he reacted that way, I could've drained his confidence laughing at him, but he acted like a big boy! I'm so proud of him. On the other hand, I learned that we have to watch our acts dealing with children, because even a little thing we do might hurt them and reflects on their future, and you know, we don't wanna say "woulda coulda shoulda" someday.I would be glad if someone corrects it to me.
Thanks in advance.
Be careful with coordinating conjunctions like so. They are used to join related phrases and not to start a sentence. See the following link
http://www.chompchomp.com/terms/coordinatingconjunction.htm
You do really well. I have a little bit of trouble with "I was like" and coundn't think how to reword.
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It's very good for your sister being interested in languages. It'll be helpful for her in the future. I tried to motivate my brother to learn English but it's so dificult when the kid is surrounded by Portuguese speakers. He's starting to show some interest about English because of the games he plays. He speaks some few words in English but the way he pronounces these words so perfect really blows me away, It's so much easier to learn when you are a child. Next year I'll sign him in an English course for sure!
Keep teaching some words in other languages to your sister, she'll thank you tomorrow. :)
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Yes, even though being an older sibling can be difficult at times. :P What you said about what we do can reflect in our younger sibling's lives was really good. :D
My little sister is interested in languages, so she is learning how to count in Spanish, German, and Korean. Sometimes she thinks she knows how to speak Spanish and makes the strangest sounds during the day. haha. :P
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Hi Savannah. That does happen all the time indeed. Actually I enjoy being the older brother so much! My brother was born when I was 18 year old, so I'm having the chance to see him growing up, that's amazing!
I wish you guys all the best!
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