Bus's story
I always find the same problem when I take the bus to go home. Firstly, I have to wait a few moments before it comes. Then, when I ride it I usually don’t find an empty place, so I stand up until I arrive. Furthermore, the worst thing is that the bus is not clean. I often ask myself why I should pay if I’m not satisfied for the service.
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Bus's story Bus Problems (1)
I always find have the same problems when I take the bus to go home. Firstly First, I have to wait a few moments minutes (2) before it comes. Then, when I ride it I usually don’t find an empty place, so I stand up until I arrive. Furthermore, the worst thing is that the bus is not clean. I often ask myself why I should pay if I’m not satisfied for by the service.(1) In English, the title of a story usually does not contain the word "story." Rather, titles are generally indicative of what a story is about. So "Bus Problems" is one possible option for the title, because the main idea of your story is the problems you have with the bus.
(2) A few moments is a very short measure of time, equivalent to only a few seconds. If you want to emphasize that you have to wait a long time, minutes is a better unit of time to use.
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Perhaps I will buy it in 2025
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then buy a car :)
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