My family
Hi at everyone!
It's the firt time that I use this tool and I write something at the start.
I am Maria, the fourth of five children. My mother and my father come from south Italy and then their marriege, they moved into Milan, in the North! Now, I fell myself in part of Milan and in part of Naple, but cerainly these city are differently fabuoluse. Two different approach to life that living in the same person. Even if they belong to the same nation, I'm fell multi-ethnic!!!!
And you? Are you fell multi-ethnic? Have you different origin?
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My family
Hi at everyone!It's the first time that I have used this tool and I write something at the start (I don't understand what you want to say here).
I am Maria, the fourth of five children. My mother and my father came from Southern Italy and after their marriage, they moved to Milan, in the North! Now, I feel I belong myself in both to Milan and to Naples, but certainly these city are very different (although both are fabulous.) Two different approaches to life that have merged in one person. Even if they belong to the same nation, I feel multi-ethnic!!!!
And you? Do you feel multi-ethnic? Are you from more than one place?
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Well done for your first writing attempt! I am learning Italian and making similar errors in Italian (per esempio, 'Ciao tutti' invece di 'Ciao a tutti!' :) )
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My family
Hi at everyone!It's the firt time that I use this tool and I write something at the start. > This is the first time that I am writing something on an English learning site.
I am Maria, the fourth of five children. My mother and my father came from southern Italy, and
And you? Are you fell multi-ethnic? Have you different origin? > And you? Are you a multicultural person? Do you see yourself as a person who originates from 2 different subcultures ?
* southern Italy > No capitalisation if it is just to show a general location of a place/country. Capitalisation is needed if it is the name of a particular place ( Northern Ireland)
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I would be happy if someone corrects me. Thanks!!
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I welcome any corrections.
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Any and all corrections gladly accepted!
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I will happy if someone corret me! thanks!!!!
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