Fall in love with Harry Potter
A girl who is 6 year old fell in love with Harry Potter. It makes her watch the movies every day. Today a girl who Harry will fall in love with had appeared in the movie and the 6 year old girl was jealous of her.
Question: When there are two girls or two boys in a story, how can I say about them from the second time? Because if I say "he " or "she" it cannot be recognized. I hope you understand what I mean :P
Thanks for your help.
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Fall in love with Harry Potter
A girl who is 6 years old fell in love with Harry Potter. Now she watches the movies every day. Today a girl whom Harry will fall in love with appeared in the movie and this girl was jealous of her.Question: When there are two girls or two boys in a story, how can I speak/write about them fr the second time? Because if I say "he " or "she" it cannot be recognized. I hope you understand what I mean :P
Thanks for your help.
I think it is clear enough if you simply say "she" or "this girl" when referring to her the second time, since the 6 year old girl is the main person about whom you are talking/writing. It is clear enough from the context that the girl in the Harry Potter film is not jealous of this 6 year old girl (haha).
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