My vacation in the USA #2 I concluded that finding a roadside motel on the way to San Francisco would be easier than searching a hotel it in Los Angeles at night. I had 6.2L black "Camaro ss", driving

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My vacation in the USA #2 I concluded that finding a roadside motel on the way to San Francisco would be easier than searching a hotel it in Los Angeles at night. I had 6.2L black "Camaro ss", driving a muscle car through the american desert was my dream. It was dark, fog and I wanted to sleep but my being thousands of miles away from home without a map gave me strength and a sense of freedom.

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My Vacation in the USA #2

I concluded that finding a roadside motel on the way to San Francisco would be easier than searching for a hotel it in Los Angeles at night. I had a 6.2L black "Camaro SS" and driving a muscle car through the American desert was my dream. It was dark, foggy and I wanted to sleep, but my being thousands of miles away from home without a map gave me strength and a sense of freedom.

My vacation in the USA #2

I concluded that finding a roadside motel on the way to San Francisco would be easier than searching for a hotel it in Los Angeles at night.

1/ "Searching a hotel" means looking through a hotel for something or someone. Searching for a hotel means trying to find a hotel.

2/ You don't need "it" here; "it" is a pronoun, and you already have the noun itself (that is, "a hotel").

I had a 6.2L black "Camaro ss". Driving a muscle car through the American desert was my dream.

1/ You need an article in front of a car type; either "a" if you're referring to a car of that type, or "the" if you are referring to a specific type. In some cases you can also use a possessive word there; "I had my 6.2 L (etc)"

2/ In English nationality adjectives are capitalised.

It was dark, foggy and I wanted to sleep but my being thousands of miles away from home without a map gave me strength and a sense of freedom.

"Fog" is the noun, "Foggy" is the adjective.

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