A tale of two mice
It is not a tale of two real mice it is a story of two computer mouse. I have two optical mouses for two computers. My only son, Mutasim Ali Adib, when he was six months old, her mother, Omme Salma, brought him to my computer table. Both mouses were radiating red light, and he was trying to hold one. He caught one mouse and trying to play with that one. He was just hitting on the computer table with that mouse, and It was changing the computer program randomly. I was trying to convince him to get that mouse from him, but I was not even allowed to touch that mouse. Being a wireless mouse, I had an option to unplug the small USB Bluetooth device, and I did it to stop messing up my computer. Next, a couple of times he did the same, and I also did the same. Later, he noticed that when he hit the mouse, it changed the computer screen and If I unplugged the Bluetooth device he started to cry which put me to plug the Bluetooth device again. Nowadays he is holding both mouses and hitting each other instead of hitting on the table.
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A tale of two mice
It is not a tale of two real mice; it is a story of two computer mouses. I have two optical mouses for two computers. When my only son, Mutasim Ali Adib, when he was six months old, her his mother, Omme Salma, brought him to my computer table. Both mouses were radiating red light, and he was trying to hold one. He caught one mouse and trying tried to play with that one it. He was just hitting on the computer table with that the mouse, and It was changing the computer program randomly. I was trying to convince him to get that mouse from him give me the mouse, but I was not even allowed to touch that the mouse. Being a wireless mouse, I had an option to unplug the small USB Bluetooth device, and I did it that to stop messing up my computer. Next, a couple of times he did the same, and I also did the same. Later, he noticed that when he hit the mouse, it changed the computer screen and if I unplugged the Bluetooth device he started to cry which put me to plug so I plugged in the Bluetooth device again. Nowadays he is holding holds both mouses and hitting them against each other instead of hitting on the table.Great work, Shahidullah ! This is great practice for advanced usage of verb tenses and pronouns. The word "that" can be useful for clarity, but remember that we can use "the" to refer to a noun which has already been mentioned. In the last sentence, you can use "is holding" only if this is an action happening while you are writing; otherwise, I think you want the present simple, "holds", to refer to a habit -- in this case, your son's new, current habit.
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