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DESCRIPTION OF A PLACE: ADDING DETAILS. Situated on the south of Spain, overlooking the bank of Guadalquivir River, Cordoba offers all the delights you’d expect of an Andalusian city. Muslim mosque or medieval walls are some examples. But the real delights of the city is wandering its narrow Jewish streets. As you suffer its high temperatur in summer months, you can imagen how important for ancient inhabitants were the patios plenty of fresh flowers into the typical houses. In the jewish quarter, dozens of restaurants and bars show you the smell of delicious, traditional, colored, handmade typical plates such as salmorejo (a kind of dense tomato soup), rabo de toro (bull tail) with local red wines. Just outside of Cordoba, there’s plenty of magical villages, glorious Mediterranean forests and traditional farming village.

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Situated on the south of Spain, overlooking the bank of the Guadalquivir River, Cordoba offers all the delights you’d expect of an Andalusian city. The Muslim mosque or medieval walls are some examples. But the real delights of the city are wandering its narrow Jewish streets. 

As you suffer its high temperature in summer months, you can imagine how important for ancient inhabitants were the patios full of fresh flowers in the typical houses.
In the Jewish Quarter, dozens of restaurants and bars exude the smell of delicious, traditional, colored, handmade typical plates such as salmorejo (a kind of dense tomato soup),  and rabo de toro (bull tail) with local red wines.
Just outside of Cordoba, there’s plenty of magical villages, glorious Mediterranean forests and traditional farming villages.

[Note: If there is only one farming village being indicated in the last sentence then it should read: "... and a traditional farming village."]

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DESCRIPTION OF A PLACE: ADDING DETAILS.

Situated in the south of southern (mejor) Spain, overlooking the banks of (the) Guadalquivir River, Cordoba offers all the delights you’d expect of an Andalusian city. Muslim mosques or and medieval walls are some examples. But the real delights of the city is wandering its narrow Jewish streets.
As you suffer endure its high summer temperatures in summer months, you can imagine how important for ancient inhabitants were the patios plenty of fresh flowers into the typical houses. patios full of fresh flowers were for (the) ancient inhabitants. 
In the jewish quarter, dozens of restaurants and bars show you give off the smell of delicious, traditional, colored, handmade home-made typical plates dishes such as salmorejo (a kind of dense tomato soup), rabo de toro (bull tail) with local red wines.
Just outside of Cordoba, there’s there are plenty of magical villages, glorious Mediterranean forests and traditional farming villages.


Good work Antonio!

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DESCRIPTION OF A PLACE: ADDING DETAILS.

Situated on the south of Spain, overlooking the bank of Guadalquivir River, Cordoba offers all the delights you’d expect of an Andalusian city. Muslim mosque or medieval walls are some examples. But the real delights of the city are wandering its narrow Jewish streets.
As you suffer its high temperatures in the summer months, you can imagine how important for the ancient inhabitants to put

the patios plenty of fresh flowers into the typical houses.

plenty of fresh flowers onto the house's patio..
In the jewish quarter, dozens of restaurants and bars waft the smells of delicious, traditional, colored, handmade typical plates such as salmorejo (a kind of dense tomato soup), rabo de toro (bull tail) with local red wines.
Just outside of Cordoba, there’s plenty of magical villages, glorious Mediterranean forests and traditional farming villages.


Excellent, strong writing!!!

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