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Children can use Mercalli this year. Most elementary schools and junior high schools give their students book report as homework in summer vacation. Recently, an huge enemy has loomed against the schools: Mercalli, a social free market service on the internet has enabled people to buy book reports which someone wrote already then they are selling on it. Many children can access Mercali easily to buy a book report another person wrote or, I guess, some parents allow their child to get it and to submit it. That’s because the parents may underestimate the importance to do book reports. The business men on the internet are very clever. I heard that the book reports written by the business men are good at just avoiding being found by teachers who tends to scold students just who haven’t done their homework. And the reports don’t have enough quality on its own not to be found by the teacher to be elected as a representative of the class to give a speech the report in front of everyone. It’s a fearful thing for such timid and cheating students who just bought that! Good businesses surely fits needs customers want. It’s actually impressive by the way. All I want to criticize about the issue is timidity the students or the parents have. Always all students should seek to be the top in the class. If they are elected and they don’t want to be a representative, they should say honestly and logically their reluctance from giving a speech. If the parents disagree a plan the school has, they should stop their child to go there. It’s actually easy, they know, in the internet age studying is available anymore to children who don’t go any schools. Only that may teach the schools to revise the old homework system: book reports that may rather unfit this technology age. Timidity just let us keep to put bad customs there.

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Most elementary schools and junior high schools give their students book reports as homework during in summer vacation. Recently, an huge enemy has loomed against the schools: Mercalli, a social free market service on the internet has enabled that sells book reports written by other people. Many children can access Mercali easily to buy a book report another person wrote or, I guess, Some parents allow their child to get book reports it and to submit it. That’s because the parents may underestimate the importance to do of doing book reports. The business men on the internet are very clever. I heard that the book reports written by the business men are good at just avoiding discovery being found by Teachers tends to scold students just who haven’t done their homework. 

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Good businesses surely fits the needs customers want. It’s actually impressive by the way. All I want What I want to criticize about the issue is the timidity that the students or the parents may have. Always all Students should always seek to be the top in of the class. If they are elected and they don’t want to be a representative, then they should say so honestly. If the parents disagree a with any plan the school has, then they should stop sending their child to go to school there. It’s actually easy., they know, In the internet age, studying is available anymore to children who don’t go to any schools...

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