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Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of having more young people than old people? TOPIC: At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? Aging population is always a challenging problem faced by the country all over the world. Therefore, the situation where the number of the young is more than the old is beneficial to government and ourselves. On the one hand, if country consist of young adult more than older people, it will have a positive effect on the speed of economic development. Firstly, industry and agriculture need a large quantity of workers which mainly come from the young adult. In addition, the young adult who have accepted high level education will spark the development of business and technology. For example, after the university foster the students with knowledge, frontier idea and thought, the young people step into the society and workplace will make a good use of their knowledge to increase the production and sales volume, and at the same time, they will do their best to improve the drawback of recent technology and craft. On the other hand, the large number of old people will increase the burden of government’s healthcare system, medicine service, as well as family. The serious illness such as cancer and heart disease happened frequently when people get more and more old, which the government and families should spend much money on them. Therefore, if a family with more young adults will reduce the pressure of the cost. So every country encourage couple have more than two children to keep the number of the young people overweight the old people, so as to prevent the appearance of aging population. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ps: i am not sure whether my though is logical, please tell me if it is convenient for you. thank you!

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Aging population is always a challenging problem faced by countries all over the world. But I think the situation where the number of young is more than the old is beneficial to government and ourselves.

On the one hand, if a country consists of more young adults than older people, it will have a positive effect on the speed of economic development. Firstly, industry and agriculture need a large quantity of workers which mainly come from the young adults. In addition, the young adult who has reached a high level education will spark the development of business and technology. For example, after the university fills the students with knowledge, and the most advanced ideas and thoughts, the young people step into the society and in the workplace will make a good use of their knowledge to increase production and sales volumes. At the same time, they will do their best to improve upon the problems of recent technology and crafts.
On the other hand, the large number of old people will increase the burden of the government’s healthcare system, medicine services, as well as families. Serious illnesses, such as cancer and heart disease, happened frequently when people get more and more old, which the government and families should spend much money on. Therefore, if a family has more young adults this will reduce the pressure of the costs.
So every country encourages couples to have more than two children to keep the number of the young people above the old people, so as to prevent the appearance of an aging population.
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ps: i am not sure whether my though is logical, please tell me if it is convenient for you. thank you!

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