Urban life...
Well everyone says urban life is better than rural life inside animals , but live in the city has very disadvantage in addition to its benefits.
Of course urban life is more comfortable and there are more features and more career opportunities and also cities' schools are better and bigger than villages' schools. But cities are usually very crowded and noisy because there are a lot of factories and a lot of cars while in the village, there are a little bit cars and industrial factories and it's better for human health.
In general I like urban life more than rural life because live in the village inside animals is very hard.
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Urban life...
Well everyone says that urban life is better than rural life besides the animals , but life in the city has some disadvantages in addition to its benefits.Of course urban life is more comfortable and there are more features and more career opportunities and also cities' schools are better and bigger than villages' schools. But cities are usually very crowded and noisy because there are a lot of factories and a lot of cars. While in the village, there are a few cars and industrial factories and it's better for human health.
In general I like urban life more than rural life because live in the village beside animals and it is very hard.
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Great job. "Inside animals" mean that you are in their bodies. I hope you have not been eaten :)
For the blue sentence you should sure commas not so many "and"s. Like this: Of course urban life is more comfortable, it has more features, more career opportunities, and it has bigger and better schools.
Good work. Let me know if you need any more help.
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Urban life...
Well everyone says urban life is better than rural life.inside animals , but live life in the city has very disadvantages in addition to its benefits.Of course urban life is more comfortable and there are more features and more career opportunities and also cities' city schools are better and bigger than villages' village schools.(Good job pluralizing a possessive, but in this case we use them as adjectives, so they are just simple form) But Cities are usually very crowded and noisy because there are a lot of factories and a lot of cars while in the village, there are a little bit only a few cars and industrial factories and it's better for human health.
In general I like urban life more than rural life because live life in the village inside animals (not sure what you mean by inside animals :) ) is very hard.
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