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Open A Toy Shop I have just bought a big toy cabinet and I have been working hard all morning. I have been trying to get my son's room in order. But this has not been easy because my son, Bob, owns over six hundred toys. To make matters worse, the room is rather small, so I have temporarily put those toys on the floor. At the moment, they cover every inch of floor space,and it is difficult for me to get in or out of the room. A short while ago, a worker helped me to carry the cabinet up the stairs. He went into my room, he got a big surprise when he saw all those toys on the floor, he gazed at it for some time then said, "you almost can open a toy shop." I smiled helpless. My son asks for buying toy every week, although I know this is not good for him,I haven't the heart to refuse.

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Open a Toy Shop

I have just bought a big/large toy cabinet/cupboard, and I have been working hard all morning. I have been trying to get my son's room in order, but this has not been easy, because my son, Bob, owns/has over six hundred toys. To make matters worse, the room is rather small, so I have temporarily put those toys on the floor. At the moment, they cover every inch of floor space, and it is difficult for me to get in or out of the room. A short while ago, a worker helped me to carry the cabinet up the stairs. He went into my room, and (he) got a big surprise when he saw all those toys on the floor.  He gazed at it for some time, then said, "you [almost] can almost open a toy shop."  I smiled, helpless. My son asks for a toy/me to buying a toy every week, and although I know this is not good for him, I haven't the heart to refuse.

Very well-written, good use of colloquial English.

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