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Telling a little about my job Hello there. I'm going to talk about my job and I'd be glad if someone could correct this for me! :) Well, I work at a harbour in Rio. It's a particular harbour of a steel maker industry. Here we have five cranes wich three are for load steel slabs and two are for unload coil from the ships. The coil is taken to the raw material yard through a conveyor belt. This belt is really big, having about 7 kilometers. I have all the electrical maintenance on my play. I've been working in here for 3 years, so I know a plenty of things about those cranes, just like faults that usually happens. But everyday I learn a little. Nobody have all the knowledge, so we have to be humble enough to learn from other people. One of the things that I like in my job is that I work four days in a row and then I get four days off in a row as well. It provides time enough to do stuff that I like when I'm home. In the other hand, I have to work on holidays and weekends, like today. My working day is from 8 a.m. until 8 p.m. Unfortunately, today is very windy from the get-go. It's unsafe to work in this condition. So we have to hold on until the wind gets slower. I love my job, I love the oportunity to get knowledge and meet different people. It's very excited. I'm looking forward to take my carreer to another level and keep doing a good job! What about you guys? Do you love your job aswell? Or just do it to get by? Tell me!

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Telling a little about my job

Hello there. I'm going to talk about my job and I'd be glad if someone could correct this for me! :)
Well, I work at a harbour in Rio. It's a particular harbour for the steel making industry. Here we have five cranes, three of which are for loading steel slabs and two of which are for unloading coil from the ships. The coil is taken to the raw material yard by a conveyor belt. This belt is really big, measuring about 7 kilometers.
I have all the electrical maintenance on my play (I'm in charge of all the electrical maintenance?). I've been working in here for 3 years, so I know a plenty of things about those cranes, like faults that usually happen. But everyday I learn a little. Nobody has all the knowledge, so we have to be humble enough to learn from other people.
One of the things that I like in my job is that I work four days in a row and then I get four days off in a row as well. It provides enough time to do stuff that I like when I'm home. On the other hand, I have to work on holidays and weekends, like today.
My working day is from 8 a.m. until 8 p.m. Unfortunately, today was very windy from the get-go. It's unsafe to work in this condition. So we have to hold on until the wind gets slower.
I love my job, I love the opportunity to gain knowledge and meet different people. It's very exciting. I'm looking forward to taking my career to another level and keep doing a good job!


What about you guys? Do you love your job as well? Or just do it to get by? Tell me!

Great job! I liked learning more about your job. Let me know if you have any questions about my corrections!
I'm a full-time student, part-time worker, so I work in a coffee shop during the school year. I enjoy getting to talk with our customers, especially when we get regular customers.

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