Hiroka's notebook entry: May 24, 2011 : Formal letter
1846-99Michinodu
Kanagaya-city Chiba 279-0033
Japan
May 24,2011
President Henry
Far East Service Company
2-3-67 Hanami, Edogawa-ku
Tokyo 332-1002 Japan
Dear President Henry:
Thank you for your recommendations of May 10th.
I'm writing to you in response to your ad in Japan Times for full- time position of customer service representative.
I am currently a college student and will graduate at the end of next year. I would appreciate it if you would send me an application form and any further details.
I have attached an updatad resume with this e-mail. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Thank you for your help.
Yours most sincerely,
Hiroka Tanaka
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I got it! See you in class!
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Thank you for your hints and I used spell-check by using WORD in PC. I sent you the mail, please check:) Anyway I like this style to correct our writing.
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Oh, but it looks pretty good so far! Just make a few small changes. :)
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I won't correct these ones, since that would be giving you the answer... but I can give you some hints. I would look at your paragraphs and make sure they are English-style and continue - instead of Japanese-style and starting on a new line. Also, be sure to use spell-check and perhaps make the body a bit longer.
Good luck!
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