Do you want to have a relax and unhurried life ?Why
I would like to have a relax life.
First, I believe people who know how to relax well can work more efficiently, because after having a good rest, they would be full of energy to do difficult jobs.
Next, I would be in a good mood if I have a relax life, because I could have abundant time to do my favorite.
Last, I would be healthier, because I don’t need to be exhausted every day.
In conclusion, I believe the purpose of life is to own happiness.
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Do you want to have a relaxed and carefree life? Why?
I would like to have a relaxed life.First, I believe (that) people who know how to relax properly(?) can work more efficiently, because after having a good rest, they are full of energy to do difficult jobs/tasks.
Next, I would be in a good mood if I have a relaxed life, because I would have abundant time to spend however I want.
Last, I would be healthier, because I wouldn't need to be exhausted every day.
In conclusion, I believe the purpose of life is to seek happiness.
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不好意思！我以为你发到了汉语中文区。
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