The silent place
Today was a rainy, cloudy and sad day. I and my father went to visit the grave of my uncle, father's brother. In that place, among hundreds of graves, I got a strange feeling. I felt how life is miserable and fragile and can end in any day, any moment. It was very devastating sense. Then the sun's rays broke through clouds a bit and lighted the field. My feelings became warmer and I realized that even if life so fragile I should enjoy each moment. It's simple, yes, but I forget about it so often.
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The silent place
Today was a rainy, cloudy and sad day. I and My father and I went to visit my paternal uncle's grave. (Usually, we indicate a person's (xxx) possession (yyy) by writing: xxx's yyy (Eg Michael's car) For an object, we write: yyy of xxx (Eg handle of the door) or simply "door handle") (We can use "paternal" to represent relatives from your father's side and "maternal" to represent relatives from your mother's side.) the grave of my uncle, father's brother. At that place, among hundreds of graves, I got a strange feeling. I felt how life is miserable and fragile and could end on any day and at any moment. It was a very devastating feeling. Then the sun's rays broke through the clouds a bit slightly and lighted the field. My feelings became warmer calmer and I realized that even if life is so fragile, I should enjoy each moment. It's simple, yes, but I forget about it so often.Hi Robert,
I hope this helps, and I am glad that your experience resulted in a positive message.
Cheers,
Lance
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The silent place
Today was a rainy, cloudy and sad day. My father and I went to visit the grave of my uncle, my father's brother. In that place, among hundreds of graves, I got a strange feeling. I felt how life is miserable and fragile and can end any day, at any moment. It was a very devastating sense. Then the rays of the sun broke through the clouds a bit and lit the field. My feelings became warmer and I realized that even if life is so fragile I should enjoy each moment. It's simple, yes, but I forget about it so often.Hope it helps!
Chris
(teh word "sense" is not clear to me)
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