diary ＃3 Best friends
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When I was nine , I had best two friends who are from Brazil. They came to Japan because their fathers were working in Japan . I didn't need times to close to their. We learned how to play the piano together. We were always together and We enjoyed a lot. But they came back to Brazil a year later. I don't know their address . It is very far between Japan and Brazil .Sometimes I remember that. They were my first best friends.I hope they are happy now.
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diary ＃3 Best friends
Please correct.When I was 9 years old , I had two of my best friends who are from Brazil. They came to Japan because their fathers were working here . I didn't need times to close to their. We learned how to play the piano together. We were always together and we enjoyed a lot. But they went back to Brazil a year later. I don't know their address . It's a long distance between Japan and Brazil .Sometimes I remember tthat they were my first best friends.I hope they are happy now.
Konichowa :) it's good keep going? Is it a true a story? I am sure you can find them again :)
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diary ＃3 Best friends
Please correct.When I was nine , I had best two friends who are from Brazil. They came to Japan because their fathers were working in Japan . It does not take long for me to find them and play together. We learned how to play the piano together. We were always together and We enjoyed a lot. But they came back to Brazil a year later. I don't know their address . It is very far between Japan and Brazil .Sometimes I remember that. They were my first best friends.I hope they are happy now.
I think it would be good to rewrite this sentence a bit too :).
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diary ＃3 Best friends
Please correct.When I was nine , I had two best friends who were from Brazil. They came to Japan because their father was working there . It didn't take much time for me to meet, and start playing with them. We learned how to play the piano together. We were always together and had so much fun, but they returned back to Brazil a year later. Unfortunately, I don't know their address . It's a long distance between Japan and Brazil . I sometimes still remember that they were my first best friends.I hope they are happy now.
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When I was nine I had two best Brazilian friends. They came to Japan because their fathers were working here. It didn´t take me long to meet them and start playing with them. We also learned how to play the piano. We were always together and we enjoyed it a lot. But they went back to Brazil a year later and unfortunately I don´t know their addresses. There´s a long distance between Japan and Brazil. I sometimes remember that time, they were my first best friends. I hope they are happy!
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