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An amazing experience in my work Once a day I was oncall in my hospital. Firstly everything was fine. I had saw my patients and there wasn't any problem. I was in my room and I was studying. Suddenly my phone range. It was the nurse. She was hurried. I asked her what is the problem. She said that one patient don't respond to anything. I went and examine the patient. I checked her heart, respiration and blood pressure. There was not any problem but she was unconscious. Suddenly I remember that she had diabetes. We quickly measured her glucose degree. We recognized that she is in hypoglycemic coma. We prepared glucose solution and gave it to her from her vein. She opened her ice in five seconds after the glucose solution and asked to us what's going on. It was amazing. I recognized again that we have a body with perfect system.

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An amazing experience in at my workplace​.

Once a One day I was on called from  my hospital. At first, everything was fine. I had saw my patients and there wasn't any problem. I was in my room and I was studying. Suddenly, my phone rang. It was the a nurse. She was panicky hurried. I asked her what is the problem was. She said that one patient don't won't respond to anything. I went and examined​ the patient. I checked her heart, respiration and blood pressure. There was were not any problem but she was unconscious. Suddenly I remembered​ that she had diabetes. We quickly measured her glucose level degree. We recognized that she is in hypoglycemic coma. We prepared glucose solution and gave it to her from through her vein. She opened her ice eyes in five seconds after the glucose solution was administered and asked to us what's going on. It was amazing. I recognized realised then again that we have a body with perfect system.
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An amazing experience at work

One day I was on call in my hospital. First everything was fine. I had seen my patients and there wasn't any problem. I was in my room studying. Suddenly my phone range. It was the nurse. She was hurried. I asked her what was the problem. She said that one patient had no response. I went and examined the patient. I checked her heart, respiration and blood pressure. There was not any problem but she was unconscious. Suddenly I remembered that she had diabetes. We quickly measured her glucose level. We recognized that she was in hypoglycemic coma. We prepared a glucose solution and gave it to her intravenously. She opened her eyes five seconds after the glucose solution and asked us what was going on? It was amazing. I recognized again that we had a body with a perfect system.

Very well written and good work!

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it's God's creation; of course! :)

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