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This is the first time that I have written an article on italki. I am A little nervous.I am a sophomore student. In china , July and August are summer vacation months for all students. Most of my classmates have been gone on a trip. But for me, with limited with money, I just have to stay at home. How boring it is . Except Besides eating and sleeping, the only thing what I did do everyday was is just playing on my Iphone.
life like that lasted went on for 20 days until yesterday when I realize that never should i waste my precious time again. Some ideas flashed into my brain through my mind. Why not make full use of this a lot of abundance of free time? Maybe i can learn English , read books and learn cooking. So I made a daily llist schedule.
1.recite ing one text
2.write ing something on italki
3.reading the series of "Harry Potter" in English
4.reading "The Dream of Red Mansion" which is Chinese classic book
5.ask my mother for help on cooking
I hope i will also get a fully vacation from now on in the future.
Thank you for correcting. If you happened to want to learn Chinese, there is a nice way on your feet .T to make friends with me. Let's exchange languages!
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No need to be nervous at all, you wrote very well. Your English is far better than my Chinese ha! ha!.
1. Remember to leave a space after your comma and period ( , .).
2. Also you must start all new sentences with capital letter.
3. Proper nouns must start with capital letter like "English" & "Chinese"
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