A professor whom I admire
I had a conversation with a professor this afternoon. She listened to me warmly while I was talking my concerns, and gave some cordial advice even though she was not my supervisor. I really appreciated it, but at the same time I actually felt a little strange because I really remembered well when we had first met. At that time she looked very strict, so that I was scared of her badly and even barely talked to her! However, 6 years after now, she has become one of the people that I admire the most. The reason why I respect her is because she always treats me as a researcher or a colleague of her so that I could talk with confidence and responsibility. Honestly I never imagined that I would have such a wonderful relationship with her when I met her for the first time. I really hope I can be a teacher like her someday.
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A professor whom I admire
I had a conversation with a professor this afternoon. She listened to me warmly while I was voicing my concerns, and gave some cordial advice even though she was not my supervisor. I really appreciated it, but at the same time I actually felt a little strange because I remembered when we had first met really well. At that time she looked very strict, so I was really scared of her and barely even talked to her! However, 6 years later, she has become one of the people that I admire the most. The reason why I respect her is because she always treats me as a researcher or a colleague so that I can talk with confidence and responsibility. Honestly I never imagined that I would have such a wonderful relationship with her when I met her for the first time. I really hope I can be a teacher like her someday.Hello Hiroko,
I hope I am a teacher like her who can inspire students like you!
Just a few small corrections and rearrangements. The collocation is to 'voice a concern', adverbs usually come before the main verb (but after 'be'!)
Hope this helps
Bob
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A professor who I admire
I had a conversation with a professor this afternoon. She warmly listened to me while I was talking about my concerns, and gave some cordial advice even though she was not my supervisor. I really appreciated it, but at the same time, I actually felt a little strange because I really remembered well when we had first met. At that time, she looked very strict, so that I was badly scared of her , so I barely talked to her! However, now, six years after we met, she has become one of the people that I admire the most. The reason why I respect her is because she always treats me as a researcher or her colleague so that I could talk with confidence and responsibility. Honestly, I never imagined that I would have such a wonderful relationship with her when I met her for the first time. I really hope I can be a teacher like her someday.***
Not bad ! A few misplaced adverbs and missing commas here and there, but amazing job !
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